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Wrote lyrics"Julias' Song"(OMD).Currently seeking lucrative creative writing projects.On Twitter as Tiggythepiggy.

23 Oct 2009

HITTING THE MARK

            I tried to tell him but he wouldn't listen.
            I skimmed a transatlantic stone
            that sank without a trace.
            The siren waiting on the rocks
             the one who knew what he knew.
             Ripples never come back.

2 comments:

  1. Very lovely and precise. And one or two elements I've often played with but never realized quite as powerfully as you have.

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  2. thr transatlantic story of social network misunderstanding succinctly summarized...nicely done

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